Is this a decent letter of appeal for financial aid?

Ok in my winter term my professor was so monotone and it became a huge bore I did go to cl however and completed work it wasnt until maybe a week or two before term ended that I stopped going I had just been so withdrawn from school I just wasnt mentally stable. Well I went back the following term ready I really was and my mother got sick so I had to withdraw from cles all of them well needless to say my financial aid is terminated. I really want to be in school I just backslid and what could I do my mother was sick and she comes first. HELP